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14 Oct 2015 00:33


14 Oct 2015 00:33
ridamaria
Member
14 Oct 2015 00:33

Dear Sir,
Please be informed that due to Eid holidays we were failure to collect the dues payment on time. Park excuse a side, we assured you that we will keep close eyes on all our outstanding payments and will collect all due amount on time in future.

Thanks & regards,


14 Oct 2015 07:15
gvshwnth
Moderator
14 Oct 2015 07:15

Park excuse a side…?????

What does that mean?

I am changing it. Please check if it is okay.

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Please be informed that due to Eid holidays we failed to collect the dues payment on time.

Leaving aside that excuse, we assure you that we will keep a close eye on all our outstanding payments and will collect all due amounts on time in future.

Thanks & regards,
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GV