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30 May 2015 09:07


30 May 2015 09:07
30 May 2015 09:07

Yadi mai Pradhan mantri hota to desh pregti karta.
—If I were a prime minister the country would progress.
Yadi mai doctor hota to sare patient khush hote.
—If I were a doctor all patients would be happy.
Yadi veh Delhi me hoti to mai usse milta.
—If she was in Delhi I would talk to her. ( Not Sure)
Yadi mai use yaad karta to veh meri sahayta jaroor karta.
—If I remembered him he would definitely help me.
Yadi mujhe sarkaari naukari nhi mili hoti to mai ek private job karta.
—If I did not get a govt job I would do a private job.


30 May 2015 09:15
"Sakshi"
Moderator
30 May 2015 09:15
mk maximillian - 30 May 2015 09:07

Yadi mai Pradhan mantri hota to desh pregti karta.
—If I were the Prime Minister, the country would progress.

Yadi mai doctor hota to sare patient khush hote.
—If I were a Doctor, all patients would be happy.

Yadi veh Delhi me hoti to mai usse milta.
—If she were in Delhi, I would meet her.

Yadi mai use yaad karta to veh meri sahayta jaroor karta.
—If I remembered him, he would definitely help me.

Yadi mujhe sarkaari naukari nhi mili hoti to mai ek private job karta.
—If I did not get a government job, I would do a private job.


30 May 2015 09:17
gvshwnth
Moderator
30 May 2015 09:17

Generally okay

Some improvements:
If I were the Prime Minister…
If she were in Delhi, I would talk to her.
If I did not get a govt job, I would take up a private job. (“do a private job” sounds odd)
If I remembered him… (that is a literal translation. Yaad karna is okay in Desi languages. but I would prefer : If I approached him…)

Regards
GV


30 May 2015 09:18
Mukesh Bhalse
Moderator
30 May 2015 09:18

Yadi mai Pradhan mantri hota to desh pregti karta.
—If I were a prime minister the country would progress.
Yadi mai doctor hota to sare patient khush hote.
—If I were a doctor all patients would be happy. Correct
Yadi veh Delhi me hoti to mai usse milta.
—If she was in Delhi I would talk to her. ( Not Sure)
Yadi mai use yaad karta to veh meri sahayta jaroor karta.
—If I remembered him he would definitely help me. Correct
Yadi mujhe sarkaari naukari nhi mili hoti to mai ek private job karta.
—If I did not get a govt job I would do a private job.Correct

Thanks,
MB


30 May 2015 09:44
30 May 2015 09:44

Wonderful !
App sabhi ki guidelines mere liye bahut important hai. Inki madad se meri English me sudhar hoga. Aap sabhi ka bahut-2 dhanyvaad ! ( Please translate into English)
With the help of these I will improve.


30 May 2015 09:56
Mukesh Bhalse
Moderator
30 May 2015 09:56

Wonderful !

The guidelines provided by all of you are very important for me. With the help of these guidelines, my English will be improved. Many thanks to all of you.

Thanks,
MB

@ MK,

By the way it was just for the translation or your hidden feelings? If this is your feeling then I would like to add that yes, really you are improving day by day.

Regards,


30 May 2015 10:05
30 May 2015 10:05

Thank you for your translation and suggestions.
Thank you so much !