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27 Nov 2023 22:19

27 Nov 2023 22:19
Furkan ahmed
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27 Nov 2023 22:19

I decided that this would be the last time.
He said, ``What will happen if I die?’‘
Then the knife jumped out
Faster than the tears I was stunned by
You know, what would it mean if it disappeared here? No.
Waltz of blood that solidifies like a candle
Even though there are so many unconnected hands
Hey, what will happen if I die?
मैंने अंतिम बार के लिए ठान लिया था। “मेरे जाने पर क्या होगा?” उसका सवाल अचानक से आया। मैं कुछ कह पाता, चाकू मेरी आँखों के सामने झपटा। मानो वो इस दुनिया से ही गायब होने को हो। पर ऐसा तो हो ही नहीं सकता। बस एक अजीब सा नृत्य शुरू हुआ जमते ख़ून का, जैसे कोई मोमबत्ती जल रही हो। इधर-उधर बिखरे कई हाथ थे। फिर मैंने सोचा, अरे मेरे जाने के बाद तो क्या ही होगा!

07 Dec 2023 12:24
07 Dec 2023 12:24

Last time, I had made up my mind. ‘What will happen after I’m gone?’ Suddenly, his question came. I couldn’t say anything as the knife flashed before my eyes. It seemed like he would disappear from this world. But that couldn’t happen. A strange dance of clotted blood began, as if a candle was lit. Several hands were scattered here and there. Then I thought, oh, what will happen after I’m gone!