SHABDKOSH

aj mere brithday party hai kamat me to tumne ana h.

tum ye pehle bhi puch chuke ho

maine abhi tumhara message dekha

tumhe to pata h yaha ka mahol kaisa h log kaisa sochte h

vo maine ek galti kar di thi maine apna profile update nhi kiya tha , karne me late ho gya

maine bahut late result dekha tha

today it is my birthparty and you have to come any how.
you have already asked it me .
i just saw your massage.
you just know to be what here’s environment , what do people think.
the mistake i had done not to update my profile, i got late to do.
i had seen result so late.

@amysharma,
1. birth party can be different from a birthday party.
2. ... asked it from me
3. ... saw your message ... not massage. Lot of difference between the two.
4. Completely wrong. What have you written here? A better one:
“You know how’s the environment here and how do people think.”
5. This is wrong too.
Not updating my profile was the one mistake I did, I got late in doing that.
6. I had seen *the* result very late.

thank you to correct me sir