sir please correct in grammar portion
09 Feb 2016 18:26
09 Feb 2016 18:26
mamta gupta
Member
09 Feb 2016 18:26
The motive was to pay tribute to our country;its unity in diversity and rich cultural heritage. To lend a festive ambience to the historic occasion. To raise voices for the peace and progress of india.
09 Feb 2016 19:05
gvshwnth
Moderator
09 Feb 2016 19:05
It’s generally okay.
I am marking some minor improvements in colour.
The motive was to pay tribute to our country, its unity in diversity and rich cultural heritage, to lend a festive ambience to the historic occasion and to raise voices for the peace and progress of India.
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GV