please do this urgently

09 Feb 2016 16:31

Member

09 Feb 2016 16:31

jo bhi corrections thi use kar diya hai state-wise details ki book mein jis par 2nd proof likha hua hai.

09 Feb 2016 17:34

Moderator

09 Feb 2016 17:34

jo bhi corrections thi use kar diya hai state-wise details ki book mein jis par 2nd proof likha hua hai.

Please use full stops and commas.
Break your long sentence into shorter sentences.

I am translating based on what I have understood but I am not sure if this is what you want to say.
Please check.

In the book marked Second proof”, giving State-wise details, whatever corrections were there, have been done.