please correct the mistakes in application. you can also write in better way
04 Sep 2015 13:11
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MemberTo,
The Service Manager
Xiaomi India Customer Care
Respected Sir,
Subject (complaint against very customer services at hcl touch janakpuri dlehi)
It is stated that, I am rohit vate Purchased two now. Of xiomi rdemi 1s from flipkart my phone is still in under the warranty. So That went to redmi service center to get this repair at your service center hcl touch G-5, 1st Floor, Janak Palace Shopping Mall, Janakpuri District Centre, Delhi – 110058, on date 07.08.15 they both submitted my mobile to make it fix And given me expected date for delivery date03.09.15.
When I reached there for get my phone as the gave me delivery date as on 0..09.15 they replied mey their
Is a problem in my phones motherboard it will take more longer time.
Detail of my to nos of phone as given below
1.
Model :Xiomi Redmi 1s
Serial No. 8656450253
2.
Model :Xiomi Redmi 1s
Serial No. 865645554
Sir, I request you Kindly take the necessary action for repair my phone and provide a proper service because. It is a big drawback of this company.
Your Sincearly
Rohit Vats
gvshwnth
Moderator@rvcv
I am highlighting in red the mistakes.
Please try again
I will check later this evening.
Bye till evening or after dinner time
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GV
To,
The Service Manager
Xiaomi India Customer Care
Respected Sir,
Subject (complaint against very customer services at hcl touch janakpuri dlehi)
It is stated that, I am rohit vate Purchased two now. Of xiomi rdemi 1s from flipkart my phone is still in under the warranty. So That went to redmi service center to get this repair at your service center hcl touch G-5, 1st Floor, Janak Palace Shopping Mall, Janakpuri District Centre, Delhi – 110058, on date 07.08.15 they both submitted my mobile to make it fix And given me expected date for delivery date03.09.15.
When I reached there for get my phone as the gave me delivery date as on 0..09.15 they replied mey their
Is a problem in my phones motherboard it will take more longer time.
Detail of my to nos of phone as given below
1.
Model :Xiomi Redmi 1s
Serial No. 8656450253
2.
Model :Xiomi Redmi 1s
Serial No. 865645554
Sir, I request you Kindly take the necessary action for repair my phone and provide a proper service because. It is a big drawback of this company.
Your Sincearly
Rohit Vats
nathan
MemberGV Sir, my suggestion-Nathan
To,
The Service Manager
Xiaomi India Customer Care
Respected Sir,
Subject : Complaint against every customer service counters at HCL Touch Janakpuri Delhi)
I Rohit Vate which to state that I purchased two Xiomi Redmi mobile phones from Flipkart. Since my phones are still under warranty, I wwent to the Redmi Service Center located at HCL Touch G-5, 1st Floor, Janak Palace Shopping Mall, Janakpuri District Centre, Delhi – 110058, on date 07.08.15 to have them repaired. The customer service informed me to leave my phone behind for them to rectify the problem. I was informed that I can collect the phones on 03.09.15.
As per the date of delivery ie 03.09,15, I returned to the service centre to get my phones. However, I was informed that the problem lies with the motherboard of my phones and that it will take a longer time to rectify the fault.
Detail of my two phones are as follows:
1. Model :Xiomi Redmi 1s
Serial No. 8656450253
2. Model :Xiomi Redmi 1s
Serial No. 865645554
I humbly request you to take the necessary action to repair my phones and provide an efficient service which would otherwise tarnish the image of your company.
Your Sincerely
Rohit Vats
gvshwnth
ModeratorInterim comments on nathan’s improved draft:
Complaint against very poor customer service
I Rohit Vats wish to state ..
I went to the Redmi sevice center….
Am logging off now. Will return after dinner time.
GV
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Member@gvshwnth @nthan edited after your suggestion. Thanks
GV Sir, my suggestion-Nathan
To,
The Service Manager
Xiaomi India Customer Care
Respected Sir,
Subject : Complaint against very bad customer service counters at HCL Touch Janakpuri Delhi)
I Rohit Vats wish to state that I purchased two nos. of Xiomi Redmi mobile phones from Flipkart. Since my phones are still under warranty, I went to the Redmi Service Center located at HCL Touch G-5, 1st Floor, Janak Palace Shopping Mall, Janakpuri District Centre, Delhi – 110058, on date 07.08.15 to have them repaired. The customer service informed me to leave my phone behind for them to rectify the problem. I was informed that I can collect the phones on 03.09.15.
As per the date of delivery ie 03.09,15, I returned to the service centre to get my phones. However, I was informed that the problem lies with the motherboard of my phones and that it will take a longer time to rectify the fault. because xiomi company is not supplying properly of the mother board.
Detail of my two phones are as follows:
1. Model :Xiomi Redmi 1s
Serial No. 8656450253
2. Model :Xiomi Redmi 1s
Serial No. 865645554
I humbly request you to take the necessary action to repair my phones and provide an efficient service which would otherwise tarnish the image of your company.
Your Sincerely
Rohit Vats
gvshwnth
Moderator@rvcv
I have marked two minor corrections in red and deleted two words by editing your post.
GV
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Member@GV Sir,
OK, Thanks for correct and gave time for it.