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29 Aug 2015 20:45


29 Aug 2015 20:45
Raj86
Member
29 Aug 2015 20:45

Just for today I will have a programme,

Bas aj ke ly mera ek yojna hoga.

I will write down what I expect to do every hour.

Main wahi likhunga jo main har wakt karne ki apecha karta hun.

I may not follow it exactly, but I will have it,

main thik-thik anushran nahi kar sakta, parantu main ise karunga.

It will eliminate two pests, hurry and indecision.
Main in do taun par dhiyan nhi dunga jaldbaji aur duwidha.


Note- Dear GV sir I just tried whatever I understood.


29 Aug 2015 21:42
gvshwnth
Moderator
29 Aug 2015 21:42

@Raj86
I am glad you are now accepting our advice and making your own attempts.
I hope others too follow your example.
I am marking my comments in red below.
Regards
GV

Just for today I will have a programme,

Bas aj ke ly mera ek yojna hoga. ...मेरी एक योजना होगी

I will write down what I expect to do every hour.

Main wahi wah likhunga jo main har wakt karne ki apeksha karta hun.

I may not follow it exactly, but I will have it,

main thik-thik anushran nahi kar sakta, parantu main ise karunga.
भले मैं  इसका ठीक से अनुसरण न करूँ पर मेरे पास यह होगा तो

It will eliminate two pests, hurry and indecision. (instead of “pests”, I prefer “problems”)
Main in do taun par dhiyan nhi dunga jaldbaji aur duwidha.
इससे दो समस्याओं का समाधान होगा, एक जल्दबाज़ी और दूसरी दुविधा
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GV


30 Aug 2015 07:42
Gyan Prakash
Moderator
30 Aug 2015 07:42

Not word to word but to express the same in my view -
Just for today I will have a programme.  आज केवल मेरी एक ही योजना है।

I will write down what I expect to do every hour. हर वक़्त मैं जो करने की सोचता रहता हूँ, उसे मैं लिख लूँगा ।

I may not follow it exactly, but I will have it,  मैं चाहे इसकी पूरी तरह से पालना न कर पाऊँ पर मेरे पास यह रहेगा ।

It will eliminate two pests, hurry and indecision. यह दो बीमारियाँ दूर करेगा , ज़ल्दबाज़ी और अनिर्णय ।