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31 Jul 2015 22:40


31 Jul 2015 22:40
Vinod007
Member
31 Jul 2015 22:40

Hamare liye doctor ka serious feedback hai. Doctor keh raha hai ke 1 sal hone ko aya hai lekin abhi bhi mujhe sara kam review karna pad raha hai aur wo use khatam karna chahta hai.
Lekin ek bar phir usne hamara kam review kiya aur use bahut se errors mile usne already hume error message kar die hain.

Jo koi bhi account pe kam kar raha hai wo dhyan se kam kare kyunki yeh feedback hamare liye acha nahi hai.

we have serious feedback coming from the doctor. Doctor is saying that it is been a year now still she has to review all the work and she want to eliminate this.

but again she reviewed our work and she found many errors, she has already messaged the errors to us.

whosoever is working on the account please pay completed attention because this feedback is not good for us.


31 Jul 2015 23:15
gvshwnth
Moderator
31 Jul 2015 23:15

Very good effort!
I am making some minor improvements shown in bold type. .
Also start your new sentences with a capital letter as I have done below after copying and pasting your translation.
Regards
GV


We have serious feedback coming from the doctor.
The Doctor is saying that it has been a year now and still she has to review all the work and she wants to eliminate this.

But again she reviewed our work and she found many errors,
She has already messaged the errors to us.

Whoever is working on the account,  please pay full  attention because this feedback is not good for us.


31 Jul 2015 23:19
Vinod007
Member
31 Jul 2015 23:19

Thanks a lot Sir. It is all your guidance and support.