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29 Jul 2015 09:56
muukesh
MemberThis is to inform you, Sir, that our library computer is connected to a LAN from 3rd Floor computer Lab, after 2;40 LAN disconnected because the teachers leaving time is 2:40
But our leaving time is 3:30.
So we need the LAN connection form the Office along with UPS for Backup Power as we have a lot of pending work in Software.
The Anti-virus has also not been updated.
So please take positive action.
Jagdish2014
Member[quote author=“muukesh” date=“1438144012
Minor corrections.
Sir,This is to inform you, that our library computer is connected to a LAN from 3rd Floor computer Lab.After 2.40 pm LAN is disconnected as the teachers leaving time is 2.40pm.
But our leaving time is 3:30pm therefore we need the LAN connection from the Office along with UPS for Backup Power after 2.40 pm also as we have lot of pending work in Software.
The Anti-virus has also not been updated.
Request for immediate & positive action pl.
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Regards
Jagdish