please correct this
30 Sep 2014 10:50
rinki sharma
New Membermein jayadatar sarey hi serials dekhna pasand karti hoon, lekin dance india dance mera sabsey pasandidar serial hai, kyunki mujhey issey bahut kuch sikhney ko milta hai.. mujhey khud bhi dance karna bahut pasand hai.. mujhey issey dance k different steps,techniques aur styles pata chaltey hain.. mera favourite judge abc hai kyunki wo in teeno me subse alag hai..
mostly i see all serials but dance india dance is my favourite one,because i learn so many things from this serial.. i also like to dance.. i learn different steps,techniques and styles from this.. my favourite judge is abc as he is totally different among these three judges..
Jagdish2014
Membermein jayadatar sarey hi serials dekhna pasand karti hoon, lekin dance india dance mera sabsey pasandidar serial hai, kyunki mujhey issey bahut kuch sikhney ko milta hai.. mujhey khud bhi dance karna bahut pasand hai.. mujhey issey dance k different steps,techniques aur styles pata chaltey hain.. mera favourite judge abc hai kyunki wo in teeno me subse alag hai..
Mostly I see all serials but Dance India Dance is my favourite one,because I learn so many things from this serial.. I also like to dance.. I learn different steps,techniques and styles from this.. My favourite judge is abc as he is totally different among these three judges..[/quote
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You have expressed yourself nicely.Congrats!!!
Few capitals added.
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Regard
Jagdish
gvshwnth
ModeratorAgree with Jagdish.
Regards
GV
rinki sharma
New MemberThank you Jagdish sir and GV sir.. 😊
Kit13
MemberMostly i watch all the serials/shows but Dance India Dance is my favourite one, because I learn so many things from this serial/show.. I also like to dance.. I learn different steps,techniques and styles from this.. my favourite judge is abc as he is totally different among the three judges..
Regards,
K.
Devanampriya Priyadharshi
MemberA couple of things I would like to add.
1) “Something/Someone is different from Something/Someone” is the common syntax. So, I would suggest
“My favourite judge is abc, as he is totally different from the other two judges”
2) It is not a mistake; but just a matter of style.
If I were to say, I would say “...I get to learn so many things…” for “...I learn so many things…”
Just my opinion.
Kit13
Member@Ninjawarrior
I agree with you completely and I had thought about both the corrections you have made. Yet, somehow the sentences did not seem wrong in my intuition. Maybe I am more accustomed to Indian English. That’s why these translation still seem correct to me. I had thought about using “unique” in the place of different as that is what the Hindi sentence means. But refrained as different would give the same sense if used with among/amongst.
And the second correction is, as you said, just a difference in the style of writing.
Regards,
K.